The20cenaddict
July 25th, 2017, 08:08 PM
I was shocked this site has a creative writing category. And yeah, I've written a lot of poems. Ok, let me offer one for you to evaluate what it is about.
The Friend
The world is round, my mind is flat.
I never know where it is at.
A girl is round, with all that fat.
When it's all over, we say congrats.
One of the few friends I actually have
just proved to me, she's not all flab,
and scored a hit, behind my back.
I felt so bad, I missed the attack.
Speaking to her is prone to failure,
but I keep trying, in order to nail her
attention to the task at hand
So her future can be more grand.
Without a mate, she seems so sad,
hanging around. Please make me glad
to meet you, at last. To be your friend.
“Just keep me fed, so I can defend
the product of my previous role
as devoted lover, and trusted soul”.
Ok, a bit confusing, but use your imagination. Thanks
The Friend
The world is round, my mind is flat.
I never know where it is at.
A girl is round, with all that fat.
When it's all over, we say congrats.
One of the few friends I actually have
just proved to me, she's not all flab,
and scored a hit, behind my back.
I felt so bad, I missed the attack.
Speaking to her is prone to failure,
but I keep trying, in order to nail her
attention to the task at hand
So her future can be more grand.
Without a mate, she seems so sad,
hanging around. Please make me glad
to meet you, at last. To be your friend.
“Just keep me fed, so I can defend
the product of my previous role
as devoted lover, and trusted soul”.
Ok, a bit confusing, but use your imagination. Thanks