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pentorch
April 16th, 2014, 06:14 AM
Hi all!

I'm not new to fountain pens, but I definitely am new to reviewing them. I just want to do reviews from a regular-guy perspective.

Please check it out, and let me know how I can improve on the reviews?

http://1penfifteen.blogspot.com

Thanks!

pentorch

Lady Onogaro
April 16th, 2014, 05:27 PM
I think you did a good job. You might want to proof for typos (form instead of from), but your prose is clear and you raise all the important points that people tend to discuss about the TWSBIs. Your pictures are good.

cwent2
April 16th, 2014, 05:45 PM
+1 :thumb:

pentorch
April 18th, 2014, 09:29 AM
Thank you for the input! Yes I will definitely make sure there are no more stupid typos. :(

jacksterp
April 18th, 2014, 04:14 PM
Good job.

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